My new story

My new story

By Jessica Strock

Posted on 07.12.08

  One day in the park a lovely couple was taking a look at the waterfall. The couple names were Thomas, other noticed by TJ, and Jessica. It was about 7:30 pm when Jessica gets a page from the hospital.

"Oh.. Thats not good." Jessica says. " Thats not good at all."

"What is it hunny?" TJ asked.

"Well theres good news and bad news. What do you want first?"

"Ummmmm... The good news."

"My friend is gonna live. Bad news is her mother has a 90% chance of dieing." Jessica said with a tear down her cheek.

"Oh hunny I'm sorry" TJ said grabbing Jessica to hug her." What happen?"

"A hit and run. She was pregnant too." Jessica had said between hard breathing.

"Who was? Your friend or her mother? Also what friend you have a bunch of.." TJ started to say.

"Ashely's sister.. Emma." Jessica said cutting off TJ.

"No.. You mean Emma June?"

"Yeah.." Jessica said while looking at the waterfall TJ brought her to see because at night they light up the waterfall.

They started to walk to the car until they heard a scream. Then turned around.

When they turned around Jessica spots the person before Anthony does.

“Look out!” Jessica yells at a mother and her child.

The sniper heard the yell and pointed it toward Jessica. The sniper a justed the scope and saw who was yelling. Then took a look without the scope. After realizing who it was he dropped the gun in the water and ran off.

“What the heck was that?” Jessica yelled at him. “Why did you shoot me like you wanted to do to the mother?”

After Jessica was done yelling, she turned and saw a van coming. Then theres a gun shot and it passes Jessica and hits TJ in the leg. As TJ is on the ground the van comes back around and grabs Jessica.

“No let go of me!” Jessica yells while struggling.

“Jessica! Let go of her you..” TJ started to say when Jessica heard another gunshot.

When Jessica heard the gun shot she kicked the guys that had her, and almost jumped until someone else grabbed her and pulled her back in. Before they closed the door Jessica saw a glimpse of TJ's blood running the run down the blacktop.

When the van started to pull away Anthony sat up a little and saw the plate number. It said: “Suck 1t”

A woman and her husband came over and helped TJ to the hospital.

When they were at the hospital the police came in after TJ got surgery. They asked him if he saw what they looked like.

“No I didn't see what they looked like they were all wearing masks.” TJ started to say. “But I did see... Well I think it's what I saw but I saw the licenses plate on the van.”

“What was it kid and we can help you to get your girlfriend back.” One of the police officers had said.

“If I remember right I think it said.. S..U..C..K..1..T.” TJ had told them.

“Ok . We'll have guards around the kid to look out for him so the people that took his Girlfriend come to get him” The cops said.

That night when the guards were watching out for Anthony a doctor came to check up on TJ. After the doctor checked on him he left.

“Ok but we'll be watching.” One of the guards told the doctor.

“Ok, TJ.” The policeman started to say to TJ “What was the Girlfriends name and we'll help find her..”

“I bet they've already killed her, so whats the point now?” TJ said cutting the policeman off.

“Well I bet if they did kill her already wouldn't someone have found the body by now?”The policeman had said with a smile on his face holding his gun.

“You...You...You know where she is don't you?”

“Wow you are a smart boy. Now did you know I was the one that took her? Could you tell?”

“Oh my Gosh! Help the policeman in here. Hes the one that shot me!”TJ yelled.

“Shut up boy!” Policeman had said smacking TJ in the head with the gun.

Later that day TJ had got a different doctor. He had asked the new one where the other doctor was.

“What other doctor? I'm the doctor.” The doctor had said.

“... But the doctor said his name was Doc. Miller.” TJ said.

“Um sir. I am Doc. Miller.”

“Then that one doctor was one of the takers of my girlfriend. And the Policeman. He was one too.”

The doctor laugh. “They are taken care of now. The police have them getting the toucher they need to tell when your Girlfriend is.”

“Oh ok. Then why am I not died by them?”

“We found out that you can't leave just yet. The other “Doctor” had put poison in the bag of water you need. So we had to change the bags and then now were putting blood and water in you.”

TJ starts to cry “If only she hadn't got that page from here.”

“She works here? Whats her name?”

“Yeah she does and her names Jessica Strock. Well Soon Kaiser but I don't think she told anyone that shes engaged. Has she?”

“No way. That girl Jessica is yours? Oh my. Shes so cool and nice to the patients. But she hasn't told anyone that shes engaged.”

“Wow. I'm glad too. Because I really haven't got the ring yet. And I don't know what kind I should get. When I'm out wanna take a day and help me pick it out when shes found and unharmed and I'm all better?”

The doctor nods his head.”Sure will buddy.”

At the waterfall that the couple was at earlier the policemen find tire tracks. They followed the tire tracks to the intersection and lost them. They get a picture of the Van on the camera. They go around and ask everyone if they had seen this Van.

“Yeah I've seen the van.” Some old couple had said.

“What direction was it headed in?” One of the policemen asked.

“To the north. There was screaming the back I'm thinking.”The woman said.

“Then they turned to the west and just keep going.”The man had said.

“If you have anymore flashbacks about the Van give us a call.” The policeman said giving them a card.

That afternoon when the police were still looking for people that seen the van. When they were talking to an old man they heard gunshots. They ran and found Jessica struggling to survive. They call 911 and rush her to the hospital. One cop looked up and saw three figures running. The cop got up and starts to run after them. When they passed the corner the cop slowed down and pulled out his gun and slowly went around the corner. Then BANG. The cop had 3 holes in his head.

Copyright © 2008 by Jessica Strock.
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